Only one wish.
Those who say love is like a rose.
Have never felt the thorns.
Those who hold their soul-mate in their arms.
Will never have to feel alone.
Why is it I feel only the pain?
And never the warmth and peace?
I feel so alone, and only have one wish.
I want to lay down my head and let my life cease.
I wish for no more lonely days.
No more cold and endless nights
I wish for no more promises,
Only to cover up the hollow lies.
My name is @poeticsnake, a creative writer and dreaming poet!
A wandering soul searching for new paths to walk on!
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One of the coolest thing I read today .. Words in love are very impressive .. Thank you for these words @poeticsnake
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Thank you ever so kindly for reading and replying to my poem!
Have a marvelous day!
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I will read your publications .. wait for you more
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That was a great poem although I really hope that's not how you are feeling as it made me fell sad. Nice work babe. 🌹
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Thank you so so much!
Don't worry, I am not feeling that way! I am just able to tap in really dark emotions for some reason. I always loved my darker work more but I don't always share it.
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That's a relief babe. 😉
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nice poem
thanks for sharing
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Thank you very kindly @youk95
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The dark side of the heart.
I would upvote this but until my upvote recharges it won't boost anything, so I'll do this the old fashioned way with words.
I liked your poem!
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Thank you ever so kindly!
Words are the best way!
Have a magical day!
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Same to you!
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This piece really made me feel the narrator's despair, and I found myself wanting to reach out.
The tragedy of suicide is that people seldom realize how bravley you lived your life. Some of us fear life like others fear death, and that's not an easy thing to understand. But there are many of us who do understand that. You are never truly alone. There are hundreds, thousands of us marching beside you. We may be hidden by the fog of sadness, but we are there. You just have to keep marching, and we'll meet up on the other side. See you around.
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Very good and intense. Thank you!
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Eres muy buena escribiendo poemas, @poeticsnake.
Disfruto cada lectura de tu blog.
Gracias por compartir de tu sabiduría
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Love this, I can totally relate to this poem
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great poem again <3 you are not alone .
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Aww don't be alone snakey, you have us! <3
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I like the depth of this poem. The dark, melancholia-filled theme is very chilling and soothing. Well done, and thank you for sharing!
PS: If you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too. :)
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So beautiful and so sad. The other side of the love coin...
Your poem touched me<3
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