Alive yet Dead

in poetry •  7 years ago 



Alive yet Dead


Today..

It's almost a month

No news, no stories

Promises fly away in the air


No problem..

But I think there is something awkward

You're Venus, I'm Mars

Always be matched


Are you still alive?

The bottom of my heart wisphered

Stalking your blog

I see you're still hanging around there


The affection is tireless

I hand over everything to God

To handle my problems

And to defend our unbalanced heart


This is me!

I still wanna fight

For us, for love

Let me be an arrogant girl


Just the promises from you

You.. Who is still alive or not

For this faded feeling

I won't be crying, for this time, just this time


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Sad yet relatable... :/ Sometimes you love someone and they promise to stay, but then they let go and it hurts a lot. Nicely communicated through the poem. "The affection is tireless". Nicely put. Expresses exactly the feeling you get. It's hard to know when to give up and when to keep fighting. But your feelings kinda push you to carry on.

Omg I have read your comment. Thanks before for comment my post. Yes, this part is the difficult thing I think in every love story.
You can imagine if you are the one who feel that and you must survive for your lobe and your life.
This's hard, I know. Everyone knows, especially people who have felt this before, but as human who have a basic that is have a holy heart, we have to understanding it and choose the best choice for our future 😊

Yes, I agree. :)

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