Shelter Invasion
Trapped in a shell;
it used to be mine.
Curled up in a corner;
my bones, crushed.
Current-swept sands
engulf my cover.
In an ocean’s sediment,
I am entombed alive.
Note. Thank you to the writers at INKubator for their suggestions and help with this poem.
Poetry by Jeremy Mifsud
Photo by Clint McKoy on Unsplash
You're saying a lot in this little poem @poetrybyjeremy, much food for thought! We should not allow our circumstances to entrap us nor let our inner peace be disturbed.
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Hard to fight it when body and mind are not in sync. Thank you for your comment :)
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It's a powerful poem, short but loud. I like it!
Thanks for sharing!
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Great last line!!
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Thank you x
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Great combination of images and poetry, love the idea.
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