poetry For love

in poetry •  7 years ago 

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You and me become one Human
Sleep fly's away

When I meet you the first time
I died on you
My youth slips slowly slowly
Moves towards you

Am just afraid
Lest this night slips out of my hands
Don't come too close

Your body is my moonlight that shines
In my life and makes me to see
You are my sunshine that shines away any fear from me

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Lol great poem you got here but u gotta make it a bit longer and more interesting by using rhymes and other stuffs. Keep the good up work up and gon't give up even when u don't see immediate results.