Everybody has an inkling of the poet blood in him or her, life must has given each and every one of us something to write in rhythm.
My Own Doom
I am my own doom
For I sit here in self pity
And swing my feet so ardently
Making no effort yet to stand
I am my own doom
For I woke up late
Though I'd slept all through yesterday
And my bed is calling still.
I am my own doom
For i stopped thinking
Of ways I'll find my way
And I've let my mind to rot
I am my own doom
For I let my fingers laze around in pots
Of warm savoury delicacies
The perfect handiwork of doom
I am my own doom
I've let my mouth agog
To speak only petty meaningless things
That only boost my pride
I am my own doom
My eyes are fiery wide open
But I see nothing above the cloak
The future now holds no spell
I am my own doom.
Of them that hear a lot
But wouldn't give a listening ear
To the things that matters most
I am my own doom
The person I've become today
Wasn't the person I had wished
For my choices had marred my days
Thank you for reading,I hope it passes the message.
You expressed your untold things using rhythm. Touchy.
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It is also a message I am sending across.
Thank you @zafrin
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I am my own doom
Cause even after escaping from the womb
I refuse to stand on my foot
So I've remained in a room
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HHmmmn... I smell self-inflicted stagnancy... You're perhaps talking a little about laziness.. refusal to grow up or irresponsibility.. I just cant quite lay my hands on the subject matter though but this was a great write.. Your poetry keeps improving and yes, I loved the rhymes
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I don't get
Are you referring to Uncle Prechi or Me?
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I am referring to you na.. I dropped the comment as a reply to your own comment
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Find the will and stand up o.
If not, you'll really become your own doom
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The will...
Let me go and find it 🏃 🏃 🏃
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😀😀😀
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They are our doom.
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Who.?
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Man indeed is made by the choices he makes. We are indeed our own doom.
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👍
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I am my own doom
Dancing ardently to
Soft sonorous symphonies
wiling away, while in a way
of morbidly addictive tendencies
My lines talk about addictions.. I hope you love em.. But really, this was some dope poetry
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Thank you! Thank you!
You can correct addiction too, and create room to change doom.
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Yes... That is true...
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