On Cape Hatteras beach, liberty caps
burst my vision, burst my gut --
roared in my ear to wind tunnel peak.
I swam oceanic karma,
sniffed sea spray to my sinuses,
spied rapid sandpipers combing
in the wake
of breaking waves.
Water clatter, sheet metal tear,
lacerated my parietal lobe
as I tracked
cumulonimbus buffalo galloping
over vast surf undulating
green and blue then
cumulus faces, bubbling white,
mimed both agony and delight.
When I closed my eyes,
I watched endless black red tendrils
of eternal action climb. I grabbed sand on sand
to sink adrenaline and lay on the beach
minding a billion microscopic shells.
The translucent ocean body,
in wordless rage, boiled
among the air
left me so new-born weak,
my neurons realigned,
I gasped for the real breath
like the first land dwelling fish.
Absolutely beautifully written my friend. You captured the experience perfectly.
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Most appreciated! I'm glad the experience comes right through.
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It definitely does. You have a way with words not many people do
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I second that!!!!
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