Lovely Poetry #1 -"LET IT FLOW" (An Original Poem)

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

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LET IT FLOW

I woke up today
Hearin' the trees say
Gently gently let it rush
Down to a river until dusk

All those fears, All those tears.

Til' the night consumes you
When there's nothing left to do,
But shine, as bright as the stars.
Drown with your light all those scars.

(Photo & Words are mine)

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a beautiful recounting of why it's always important to look for light in dark times and the little joys in life when it becomes hard, @reewritesthings.

also, in that last line, a nice reminder that rebirth can happen at any point in one's life. a good message & one to always hold on to.

thank you so much for sharing, Ree, this is a pretty picture you have created in this poem here.

Thank you so much for the appreciation @carmalain7! It's very important to always look at the bright side when life gets tough. Optimism changes things. Thanks for dropping by!

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Nice poem! Keep up the good work @reewritesthings.

Thank you @brokemancode!

Keep writing good poems @reewritesthings. :)

Thank you so much for your kind words @honeyletsgo!

Creatively structured. NICE! :)