Songs To Say,
I am planning to release a poem every few days from this book of poems that I wrote while in graduate school. Don’t try to make sense of them. Many are just a journey through images. The following was the opening poem before the section on FIRE.
Are Your Feet Clean?
I sit here watching pictures in the air---
Laughing at visions--rivers of them---grotesque and out of bend,
As my two feet dream away from this dusty floor
To the salty pure ocean floor, where warm waves
Sweep past my feet to cleanse them of their miswalking.
Feeling the ground, the blades, the humps, and the stones are wet…
My hand in water assumes its’ cleansing, Oh God, they’re back---laugh.
I’ve found a pool, cool upon my hands, the lilies’ home,
Shall I walk on? The flowers make blindfolds.
Go away you vision people! Your face is not so sweet.
Thank God, another pool, submerge my foot,
Freeze it---numb it---Oh God, the stones live beneath me,
Cold muscles gleaming between contracted concrete sinews---
I’ve grown to love them, love them all---
And He began to wash their feet.
Very insightful philosophy Post more poems
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Thank you, Tomorrow will be Coal Fire...
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Very meaningful poem, Patrick! :)
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thank you!
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Evocative imagery captured in your words. I love the intimacy of your closing line, but then that may just be me being autobiographical. As one whose feet (and soul) have been washed by the great foot washer... thank you.
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I am glad to be on your radar.
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Glad to have found you. I’m pretty brand new to this whole Steemit stuff and still feel like I’m just getting my head around stuff and making connections.
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Very simple but the message are great and wonderful
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beautiful poem brother, I will follow you and I hope to see many inspirations on your part, stop by my blog @engelberth and vote for my post friend. Greetings.
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Wow..
The imagery with the words is on point.
I've posted my first poem on steemit. It's a short poem.
https://steemit.com/poetry/@rjunaid12/broken-and-bruised
I'm just learning the art, so any suggestions would be really helpful
And keep up the good work
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I love your imaginative creativity bro.... Poems were meant to be touchy on the soul of the poet.. The poem lines are captivating...I'll always stop by. Expect mine soon @sammynathaniels
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All comes clean in water. Travel far and do much but take a moment to breathe and cleanse. A very atmospheric and beautiful write. A treat for the reader to inhabit:)
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Wow this is really a nice poem i've ever read..
Thank you for sharing with us @revdocwelch
Keep posting!
Love,
@micch
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