A deep wet kiss

in poetry •  8 years ago  (edited)


 Has this ever happened to you


That sad day

When love ices over

When intimacy is replaced by strange

Its moments like this 

That drove me to seek

Bliss in other places

Than a deep wet kiss

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Oh yes. Nice poem.
Now I'm curious as to where you found your Bliss?

Your a bold girl lakshmi to ask this question, but ,at the same time, what concern do you have, as Lakshmi is always near the Avatar(Krishna in a previous age) massaging his feet as you both float along on an ocean of milk.
So there is a hint here if you want to find and explore it.

that was truly a sad day!
And U can definitely relate to the 3rd line.
Maybe I should seek the bliss?