My Original Poetry - "Under the banyan tree"

in poetry •  7 years ago 

An old banyan tree beside my
sweet home, everyday I see.

I take rest in peace
under its cold shadow.
sometimes I only sit silently
but, do not feel lonely.

when I touch I feel its affection
I weep for a while remembering my mother’s face.
when I was a child thinking and thinking
about my mom I lost her forever.

a cold breeze blows around me
under the banyan tree.


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Good poem writer.

ha ha .... I tried. Happy to hear that you like it ..... thanks :)

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Beautiful and heart touching lines dear,as I am a mother I can understand your feelings about your mom.great lines, keep it up.please see my feeling about my son,who is now living far from me for his studies.

thanks madam for sharing your thoughts :)

Love your poetry Sir!

thank you @ali1357 :D

Great,it touched my heart. Very nice poem, thank you for sharing.

thanks for your comment @rit7 :)

This is so good. Really love all the feelings it brought out. Honestly this was amazing to read, keep up the work!

many many thanks @ykdesign for your compliment :)