POEM: SPACE

in poetry •  8 years ago  (edited)

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SPACE I.

Drips
Of meditation

I took a course
An introduction to space
In the blackness of an eyelid

I sat firmly
Separated from rain
Curtains on dry ground

There is so much out
So much doing and moving
So much clicking and scrolling
With one way visuals

And this would be
A voyage all senses would need
With a timely fee


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SPACE II.

She handed me a look
One I could borrow
Until the morrow
Paid wisdom

And this confidence
Like the time you promised
I'd see you after the sun

Became a residence
A pride I could walk in
Rest and be bested by myself

You send messages
To me who was once
Too weak to parry or pray

With the vestige of vests
Covering my chest
I knew dressings
For what I should say


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SPACE III.

I was too afraid to write
So I took space
And a moment's pocket

But I should have just written
Blabber on blubber
Parsing off paper
Abandoning acerbic accomplices

This bird nested swallow
In my throat hollow
Pecking away potential

Has taken a cue
And flown to you
With no drag or lift


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SPACE IV.

She cherished the time
From 7 to 8AM
Before the students arrived

It was her trek
On the mountain
Of minds before dawn

She loved the air
From mouths that stirred
Her hair with truth

When her descent was due
These pupils knew
Her source from the dew on her shoes



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I like his poem, sometimes I write but I could not tell if they are poems.

You should post them anyways. A benefit to posting the poetry on Steemit besides the detox I mentioned is you are able to get a perspective on internal emotions. It puts you in power and can help make sense of complex situations.

Yes I second @rubenalexander advice.

@semre, I never realized how much I enjoyed expressing myself through poetry until I gave it a try. It's been a benefit if to no one else then to myself.

There's something to be said for connecting with your innermost emotions and thoughts. You can do it.

Thank you, for a long time I have written and many of those things was deleted or forgotten. I have things stored, one day these will be published, thanks again@rubenalexander ,@freeinthought .

The reflection of peace

I really enjoyed reading @rubenalexander.

My favourite of the lot is the last. I have young children and it resonated the most. I often find myself sneaking quiet moments to daydream and indulge in creative thought and writing. Thanks!

Following you now too! 😀

Need time for those musings and imaginations!

I'm lost in space... Got to find my gear and head back to ISS! Nice composition!

Liked these ones.

Thanks for sharing. Were these all written by the same person? I see you have your sources at the end, so just curious. :)

Those sources are for the photos.

I wrote the 4 poems. I first saw this cluster technique in a Robert Frost book (lost it), where you let your mind ponder on a topic over multiple poems. It is a nice detox.

OH! That makes way more sense.

All of the poems had a very similar style, but vast differences with the depth. Keep writing, would love to read more. +Followed

following and resteem itt ! very good you attract my attention

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Amazing poetry... Flow is awesome

Thanks @aetiss.