Are my words whispers in your ears?
And do I pale and vanish in your eyes?
I didn't think so, then why is it that I seem not to exist to you.
The next, fit for fodder.
Why is it that no matter how hard I try,
My efforts go unnoticed.
For this is the way of wounding.
If I spent my time solidifying myself,
Perhaps I would be stronger.
The feminine wiles, temptations of the flesh.
Should I just withdraw from it all,
Make my existence, unknown..
I must say that this poetry is truly amazing. The best part of this poem is that it is written in a very lucid way, the word, the phrases everything is in a clear way but the way it's meaning has turned out to be, it gives the poetry a lot of feel. Simple and deeply filled with feelings I would say. And the feelings you have portrayed in such simple words is remarkable.
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Thank you, your praise leaves me beyond words to respond in kind, I.. am speechless. Thank you again.<3
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This is so sweet of you. You're worthy all these appreciations and I look forward towards reading more of your work. I hope you'll keep astonishing people with the simple poetry with bewildering meanings of them. Keep writing and stay happy.
Have a nice day. :)
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Thank you again! I will be sure to bring more of my simple words to steem-it, especially if you enjoy them so much. Have a wonderful day. <3 :)
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Dude, this one was deep. Not all poetry is sunshine and butterflies. I like the emotion that this one captures. Truly felt like this one was from the heart with raw emotion.
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I was at a low when I wrote this one. I tried to capture the feelings with the words as best as I possibly could. Glad you enjoyed it. <3
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In love with your writing! Your speak to my soul in words I cannot find... #number1fan
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I'm so glad you like it <3333, it was a very tough/scary choice to publish this.
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Brilliant words.
Keep going dude.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. Was a troubling time for me and difficult to share.
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Fantastic writing, pretty intense... And that's been said by someone who isn't easily impressed by poems. You got me :)
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Thank you for your kind words, I will try to bring more of my musings here for all to enjoy. <3
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A melancholy, unsettled, troublesome soul feigning to be loved, deteriorating passion is a non-existence proverbial to a vain reverie.
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Such heartbreak, I felt every word of that. Been through much the same, it's not a nice feeling.
Very humbling post, thank you for sharing - great poetry.
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You are welcome. <3
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