A FRIEND OF MINE (ORIGINAL POEM)

in poetry •  7 years ago 

That girl is just a good friend of mine,
she has the raven, which is so divine ...
Her lover left her, she has a broken heart
and she is so afraid of a brand new start ...
And we usually do not so often talk,
because she takes her dog for a walk ...
She is awake into the long, long night,
in her big room you will see the light ...
I wish to her everything well and good …
Escape from your dark and gloomy mood!!!
I do not know, what she was doing long before,
I hope that she will find a man, whom will adore ...
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      ·  7 years ago 

    Beautiful words. Thank you for sharing

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Thank You and thanks for reading my poetry. :-)

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          ·  7 years ago 

        This is the best Steemit comment ever

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Thanks. :-)

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              ·  7 years ago 

            I enjoy this poem.. the Raven is a Beautiful Soul.. to adore feels wonderful.. I hope the same for her as well Xo Thank you for sharing.

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                ·  7 years ago (edited)

              Thanks a lot. Yes, I totally agree with You, I hope so, too, that she will find a man whom will truly love. Thanks for reading my poetry.

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