Come on over let's try this thing all again.
Who will love you?
Who will understand?
See how tense your face is..
Hold up a little.., don't you see you spend too much time thinking about your fears?
In a moment we can, for the rest of our lives, fly and be happy.
But then,
Who will wait like you?
Or do those things you do to me?
Time has come...,
Light has come...,
And I think you know.
There's never gonna be me ever again.
I have faded away.
Away into space.
And empty words I have here.
When my pen is with you over there.
Is this really happening?
Please..., where am I?
I think need a help.
Just a little one.
By @scoloscope
Thanks for reading.
I enjoy your free verse, and your flow of thoughts and emotions. For me the ending can be stronger though, "I think need a help" could be altered to provide a more powerful ending.
"Please... where am I?"
"A helpful embrace..."
"Just your touch."
Something like that, food for thought=)
Curious on your thoughts about a poem I just wrote, I think you'll like it!
https://steemit.com/poetry/@sixshot/last-desserts
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Wow...
I get ur point.
Thanks
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