RE: Poem / Nothing, just Nothing

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Poem / Nothing, just Nothing

in poetry •  7 years ago 

I enjoyed your poem, however I felt the rhyming takes away from it. At least from my perspective! The end rhymes felt forced, and I feel if you broke the rhyme scheme your thoughts would flow stronger. Just an idea =)

I would love some feedback on my poem!
https://steemit.com/poem/@sixshot/alesia-poem

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Yeah so I was told, I was pretty beat when I wrote this XD I will do better in my next one

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