Day 3 - Roses are red, Violets are blue

in poetry •  7 years ago 

Roses are red
Violets are blue
All is said and read
This isn't that kind for you

We are born and bred
With emotions as glue
Some with names like Ed
Yet what brings us together is true
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Poetry is not just to be read
It transforms into words, glue
Beneath the blood of a pen bled
A structure bent and braced through and through
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Restrictions, freedom, division, embed
A kind of literature to pursue
Where jewels lie beneath the seabed
And you shall find if you look, clues
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      ·  7 years ago 

    Nice Post,
    Done Follow, Please FollBack :)

    Thanks You.

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Thanks for reading and commenting

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Wow... @skodie.. i love this one..

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Thanks. Interestingly enough, I feel poetry can only be explained by poetry. Thanks for enjoying it and commenting

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              ·  7 years ago 

            Great post man. I enjoyed reading it. It full of rhythms that makes it interesting to read. ROSES ARE RED.

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                ·  7 years ago 

              Exactly... Thanks for reading, enjoying and commenting. There are a lot more days ahead. Stick around

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                Wow... I see what you did with this poem right from the start and it’s creative, lovely.

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  😁
                  Thanks for reading and commenting. I enjoyed writing it too

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    You welcome

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      Your use of words is just astonishing , that's a sweet poem there.

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        I try my best. I hope the meaning wasn't lost on you. Thanks for reading and commenting

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          I like the playfulness of this poem, and how it starts with roses are red and violets are blue and then basically goes on to a more profound meaning from there. I like the use of the symbolism of the sea bed. I also like the visual aspect of all the line breaks getting progressively longer as the poem goes on and becomes more meaningful. Good job.

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            I felt I had to start with something simple yet easy to relate with. After all, the first poem I ever wrote was one of "Roses are red, violets are blue." Kind of poetic justice to use it to explain my love for poetry.

                            Thanks for enjoying it. There's more in the pipeline. Stick around

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