My husband and I were recently inspired to write a poem about each of our five children. It has become a dual project, and I'd like to share each one with you as they are created! Here is the first one about our only son. https://steemit.com/poetry/@snowpea/my-marvel-my-son-original-verses
So far my husband writes the rough draft, then it is edited and posted by me.
This one is for our eldest daughter. Enjoy!! :)
Hummingbird so free
Naomi, sunshine girl,
Lover of life, truly a pearl
Spunky, witty and smart,
A student of life
From the start
Gathering from each experience
That comes near her path
A deep thinker,
Not great at math
Marvels at existence
Innocent, energetic, and sweet
She's such a delight
And likes everyone she meets
My daughter she is,
This can't be denied
Someday she may give us
a few sleepless nights
An independent spirit
Creative with glee
I love that girl,
An extension of me
When I first knew
She was a hummingbird so free,
This was at the tender age of three
She was in a parking lot
With her mother and I
She saw a shiny yellow moped
She wanted to fly!
Her eyes fell upon it,
she thought it was hers
She wanted to be as free as a bird
A downright fit that little one had
But we thought it was funny
She wasn't being bad
A favorite memory
of her adventurous nature
Well this happened
a couple years later
She drove a go cart so fast,
and beat everyone there
Laughing out loud,
The wind in her hair
Naomi, my child
You're growing up so fast
Look at how much time has passed
And even though now you're only eight
I don't want the years to fly,
I want to wait
My delightful girl
My hummingbird so free
You really must know
What you mean to me
You are so beautiful
Both inside and out
This I know
Without a doubt
Thanks for reading!
Love, snowpea ❤
That was beautiful—I love the rhyming style! It reads like a song, too; you can almost hear elusive music accompanying the words. Thank you for sharing something so special :)
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Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! :)
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Hi @snowpea, that's so touching and lovely. I suck at poetry hahaha. Take care and have a nice day! :)
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Thank you for your kind words! :) I think poetry takes practice for some people (like me haha). You have a nice day as well!
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@snowpea Loving this poem, such a fantastic idea you should put it on the wall and framed as a constant reminder! Im sure the whole experience was fun to do as it kind of forces you to learn more about each other and to think about all the good qualities each of you have! Certainly an exercise I intend on doing also! Thanks for the lovely poem and sharing it with us steemians!
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Peace and Loved my friend!
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It has definitely been a rewarding experience for us to work together in such a way. Thank you so much!! Peace and love to you as well! I'll give you a follow back. 😊
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Thats such a beautiful thing that you all do things like this for each other!
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I wrote a poem for my daughter when she was an infant and throughout the years she has mentioned to me countless times. Your daughter will adore this!
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It's nice to know she'll have it forever! 😊
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The Phantom of the Opera is here.
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Cherish each day you have with your children. They do grow up too fast and just like that... they leave your nest. Beautiful poem about a lovely little girl. Thank you for sharing your heart.
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This is a good idea to write poems about our kids...cool! I love ur poem💕😉 I could write one for my 1yr old...but definitely not for the one in my belly...as its causing me massive vomiting haaaha love love love
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Thank you!! Yeah, I guess you could write one for the one in your belly, but it wouldn't be very tasteful.😂😂😂
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Your kids must be really lucky to have parents who writes poem about them..... Wow really luvly
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Thank you, I'm glad you read it! :)
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