RED
I drive, I drive,
I pass you by,
no more waiting for me,
I find, I find,
I roam my mind,
no more praying for me,
I choose, I choose,
define my muse,
no more sailing for me,
So calm, so calm,
in winds and fog,
no more crying for me,
I see these lights through rows of red,
through pain and sorrow and sea,
I see these rows in lines of red,
to borrow my apathy,
Float me by the shore's, I bled,
pass me by the water's edge,
this sea of red,
my eyes all red,
Contemplate the color......
contemplate this hue....
contemplate the mood I feel, while taking off my shoes!!
not me no more,
I drive, I drive,
I pass you by,
no more waiting for me
Shavon Bonnie Legion
It has a good flow. I like it. Thank you for sharing. - Bonnie @soundlegion
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Lovely poem, it has so much depth in it, magical words love it thanks for sharing
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I love your repetitions in each of the verses, i find, I find it made the poem have a rhythmic effect, I love your simple rhyme too, it's beautiful Bonnie, you are too talented, I love you so much.
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so hot
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nice poetry by nice poet
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So hot
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Wow Shavon,
its incredible! Really. It gots its own unique Magic.
Feels like going to another Time, for me its feels just a little like
Middleeart by Lord of the Rings. Could be a Poem sang by Arwen the Elb.
Id love to read more such power- and beautiful Poems!
Best Wishes,
Johannes
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As beautiful as talented. Beautiful poem too.
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wow ! nice poem ,i read it and enjoy.
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You're an amazing artist! Much Love!
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