The kettle struggles while in darkness lays
The bubbles beat and the stillness sways
Eyes are darkened as face becomes lit
Looking at blue light squinting just a bit
Separated by no more than an inch or two of wood
A mile apart, a moment, the door between stood
The frailty of it all solid in mind
The falsity of it all uneasy to find
Where are the words that so easily flow
The phrases that all should readily know
Words to be whispered from tongue, lip to ear
Silence bites down, blood comes from fear
Moments come by and ripples move along
Closing the distance to forever's eternal song
Once alone, twice together there were times
Sunshine and bad weather, there were crimes
Swinging the feet from the pier at the bay
Looking at the reflections no words to say
The emotions we felt would ride the waves
Never to be lost in unknown deep caves
Smiles and frowns, left, rights and downs
Naive and deceive like childish clowns
We knew where we were and what we would do
We never saw the wind and direction it blew
Blind were we to understand the impossible
Small lives and minds beating at the improbable
Our toes dipped in and in it we dissolved
Consumed by the water the solution unsolved
The petals of us across the surface are spread
Dispersed by currents claiming the lost and dead
What of the love found, where is it now
At the door of goodbye an exit with bow
All things must end and return to the pool
The hot waters of past, must eventually cool.
Taraz
[ a Steemit original ]
I have written over 3000 words today about community, the last 300 tonight can be for me.
Goodnight.
I like it.
I usually write fiction but I've been known to throw a poem down here and there.
Hot Waters will eventually cool in some people......
......but as I sleep I hear her call my name and the fiery torrent rages again.
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Nice.
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I loved this part and brought back memories to my mind
"Moments come by and ripples move along
Closing the distance to forever's eternal song"
That words, long ago did not read something similar, I congratulate you for your dedication.
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Great write .... these words in particular resonated with me ..Sunshine and bad weather, there were crimes
Swinging the feet from the pier at the bay
Looking at the reflections no words to say
The emotions we felt would ride the waves
Look forward to seeing more.
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"At the door of goodbye an exit with bow" "The hot waters of the past must eventually cool."
</3. Those lined strikes me. I can truly feel the emotions bursting from your poem.
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Beautifully written, and very relaxing to read at the end of the day. Thank you.
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lovely writing thanks for shere love to read it.........
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@tarazkp such a great words with really really deep meaning never know that you write, you have a great talent buddy
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Well that was bad ass.
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amazing poetry, sorry dear i am dont know means. please create a note poetry means. thanka
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Very nice poem @tarazkp.
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wow the picture is very nice and by the way the poetry is incredible.
You write these yourself, do not you?
You really are a success, my friend
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Great writing... I love this part
,,the fraitly of it all solid in mind
,,the frailty of it all uneasy to find
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nice poem.
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Nice poem prompting some self-reflection...
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That is a mighty creation right there sir :) I like the play of words.
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