Poem - Could

in poetry •  7 years ago 



Everything has been erased,
Could it be that I lost my reason?
in my head we are fighting,
many auguries arrive,
all this cruel and black despair,
creating an ocean of pain,
where the sweet death will dwell
Could it be a dream?
the sky is clearing up,
the world keeps spinning,
while I get weak,
i still keep hope,
to fix all the defects,
and nothing else matters,
till die,
Could it be that I need time?
to find the way,
without crushing the dreams,
let my heart go,
on a long and lonely road,
with every gram of energy,
with every second of the days.



By Leonardo Blanco (@tcpaikano)

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The poem is sad but I like how you wrote/composed it.

thank you comments are the ones that inspire me to keep writing

This truly can depict how most people will feel at one point of their life. We have our ups and downs definitely Thank you for writing out a heart-felt poem to us. ;)

thanks for your comment heart

Hola @tcpaikano tu poema me gusto mucho, es triste, pero el mensaje me llego. Gracias

gracias comentarios así son los que me inspiran a seguir escribiendo

@tcpaikano,

Geese, brother. Dark, dreary and depressing. I need a drink.

My stimuli-induced-psychosis aside, an obviously potent use of words and imagery (or why else would I be sobbing).

thank you comments are the ones that inspire me to keep writing

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Very beautiful poem. I really want to know the inspiration behind it.


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This poetry is very emotional. Thanks for doing it right.
@tcpaikano.

Wow.. a lot of emotions captured in this... beautifully written piece..

Master sculpting of words!

With Love
Hart Floe Poet

Thanks you

Great writeup @tcpainkano. There's a lot of depth and emotion in it👌

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