Terry's Poetry Tryings. Life In a Mask.

in poetry •  7 years ago 



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One told me - money is the main thing!

Another said you've got to find true love.

For third, life's like a stretched string!

Some do not care at all, they are "above"...



In truth, advice is good when asked!

But people love to talk, seem smart...

Our souls under false tips - we masked!

You need to think for yourself >>>START<<<



I know for sure one thing for me -

If I made a mistake or "slipped" in life...

My fault, I will not "blame for free"

No blame, no anger, and no strife!



P.S. Feel free to write me about my mistakes, friends! 'Cause I'm still learning English :)


Sincerely, Terry Craft.


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Yes,,, I like,

Brilliant post - thanks!

upvoted and you have my support..you have my thumbs up upvote.

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Good. I think that I also want to write a poem about life and publish it. I hope people here like it too)

Very nice poem friend, yes advice is very good when asked.very impressive thought. You are a genius to express beautifully all facts of life. I have to learn lots from you friend, thanks for sharing such a valuable message, wish you a very good time friend, thanks.

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Nice writing...Thanks to share there crystal words..We all wear masks, and the time comes when we cannot remove them without removing some of our own skin.

life is a never-ending lesson. would be a biological achievement for earth humans if parents can pass on the hard lessons they learned genetically to their children!

but we are care about money :)

Really?

Is there money in Steemit? I thought it is only human bots in Steemit? :)

I actually liked it. The ">>>START<<<" reminds me of sleazy sales pages and annoying entrepreneurs who talk about money ONLY.

Great juxtaposition with the theme here. Nice one @terrycraft.

Life is experience <3 What you make out of it is just mixtures of the experience.
Lovely article brother.

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You need to pay heed to one & all to get going :) But I prefer money with true love :)

Very good, well written and thought out - very refreshing.

What am awesome poem! I loved it! Well written Terry you did good😊🌷

i love it but most people love money more than anything

Wonder-full Poetry!

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I like the planet you created in your poem

This is a nice poem, indeed, you have to know those you seek for advice

This is A great Post.. love it :)

awsome poetry and good work ❤️❤️

Your skills are undeniable. I think am still learning english but can tell yours is past okay or just good! :) You are doing great 💚

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

I did understand most of it Terry, nice lines. I'm not much of poet myself, lol. And my soul is masked, and I have blamed others for my faults in past, luckily I don't do that anymore.

Its just right to accept your mistake if you're the one at fault, since you are the one who made that decision and not other people. I like this post @terrycraft. I hope I could read more. :) I'm following you.

well your English is perfect here I think you need not worry!

I hope I dont sound too cliché but it's true... money can't buy you love. & like your description states. Maybe poor in pocket but fruitful in Love :]
I think there is a lesson to be learned!
Enjoying your writing! Well Done!