...And when the last door closed
There are no more regrets!
One thing remains proposed -
The longest road and cigarettes...
Don't think too much ahead of time,
The clouds thicken without warning!
No matter - pure your soul or grime...
Sometimes, inside, you will be roaring!
But not this one last time...
You're no longer afraid!
All that you have - lifetime,
But everything has its end.
And now you are without shackles,
Your gait is strong and resolute!
Let fly away the last soap bubbles -
Dark... silence... absolute...
Sincerely, Terry Craft.
Don't think too much ahead of time...
I love this, though many may oppose it but that's the secret of good living and a cure to anxiety.
Thanks @terrycraft
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wonderful poetry @terrycraft . Everything in this world has to end. life has too.
Then why we are running after life?
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Many philosophers, scientists, poets and religions are arguing about this issue ... but I believe - you just have to live :)
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Nice poem @terrycraft . Enjoy till we alive :)
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A melancholic poem..lets not think about the end as we all know that everyone has to face one day..so lets think of the present and enjoy our life.
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Exactly!
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ThAnkinGyoU mY fRienD beAutifUl poSt . GOd blEsh u
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So short, and yet I suspect that it took you far longer to write than it appears. If I am wrong, then you most certainly have a gift. For it seemed very deep and makes one think- as any good poem should do.
I had no idea that poetry could do so well on here. I did only have one try though. Your poem, and its worthy rewards, have inspired me to have another go at one for myself. I thank you for this.
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Thank you very much for your kind and motivating words!
English is still difficult for me... It really takes a lot of time. But I try to use the expression to convey to the reader the depth of my thoughts. Sometimes it turns out, sometimes it's bad :)
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When I read this...
I thought of God telling one of his angels he is set free (he can take off his wings now) and join the humans on earth.
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Hello!
In this poem, I left for the reader a lot of ways for interpretation by using a lot of metaphors. The poem really is not about death, in the usual sense of the word...
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I see!
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and for that you have been followed and upvoted, feel free to follow back
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i agree everything has its end even the hard and bad times, that line has captured my attention, interesting and beautiful
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so deep. you did a great job. resteeming. :)
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My scant knowledge of English makes their mistakes, but I try. Thank you! :)
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Interesting poem. Really love it. Great job👍
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Something to think about! You have my attention. Upvoted an followed! :)
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Nice poem and interesting too. Thanks for sharing..
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This poem is wonderful I feel it its so true I give you props my friend😊😊
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beautiful fit of words together!
I guess we have no control .. and the best solution is to , just let be!, but the task is to come to terms with this , and to just give in, and let it flow...
Got me thinking for sure, thoroughly enjoyed ! :]
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This is beautiful piece of poetry reminds me of immortality. Beautiful one. I am also a poet like you, I appreciate deep poetry when I see one. Upvoted and following.
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