SteemitPoetryContest #11 Withdrawal / An Original Poem

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

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Desperately hollow, its a hard pill to swallow
A chance to feel your touch
Is that truly too much?
Left now with nothing to clutch

Laying in bed alone, my heart a heavy stone
Why am I so cold
There's so much left to unfold!
A bleak, hollow household

As colors bleed to grey, my friends all castaway
A future now so bleak
I've nothing left to seek
A soft cry was heard, as I drop without a shriek

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My Entry to @terrycraft's poetry contest. I recommend checking it out as there's some good entries this week!

-Themadrunnah
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Good rythym, and I like the imagery you produce with your prose. I must say, rather bittersweet but very thought provoking in spite of this. Good storytelling :)

Thank ye kindly good lady! I do enjoy the bittersweet ones!

Awesome rhymes ! Loved your entry Good luck !👍👍👍💕😍

Thank you so much! May luck be with you as well!

This one's so nice! Goodluck in the contest too!

Yeah! Go us!

Woohoo! 👏🏻

Your rhymes are good.🙌

Thanks!

Perfect ending!

Glad you like it!