We will cherish it for a thousand Years.
Almighty knew we were meant to be,
Since the day we met,I could ever See.
Tattooed memories we have, will never Fade,
For those are our milestones that we proudly Made.
Everything seem so perfect when you are Near,
How I'd wish it was not just in my dream that you will Appear.
I never thought I could Find,
That you're always,on my Mind.
Whenever I feel so Sad,
You're just right behind me, I never knew I Had.
And then you're always jolly beside Me,
Butterflies in my stomach, couldn't let them Free.
Please allow me to show you the World,
For I have known everything that will make you Uncold.
Hope you like my random piece of melodramatic poetry. Share and comment your thoughts and experiences in relation to the poem and you'll receive a quite good weight of upvotes from me. Thank you and don't forget to follow me, @themanualbot!
Amazing poem,thanks for sharing
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Amazing poem" never thought I could Find,
That you're always,on my Mind.
Whenever I feel so Sad,
You're just right behind me, I never knew I Had."
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I feel the depth of this poem.
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I love the rhymes. This is a great inspiration.
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Thanks for the appreciation. :)
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Slow clap @themanualbot☺️
Such an inspiring poem to read!
Thanks for sharing this with us, keep doing what you love!
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@micch
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Thank you for dropping by @micch. Yes, I will keep going. :)
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I like the passion again, a few thoughts on phrasing which catch my eye...
Instead of "Time flies in every laughter and Tears,"
perhaps "Time flies in every laughter, and every tear."
"Since the day we met, I could ever see."
"Since the day we met, would be all I ever see again."
I don't know, food for thought! Love the poem!
I have a new one for you as well!
https://steemit.com/poetry/@sixshot/rustling-leaves
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Thank you! :)
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Wow. your poetry amazed me.so simple and so effective. i like it @themanualbot keep sharing:)
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Wow that's cool knowing how you expressed things in poem.
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I also love composing it. Thanks
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