The One Within – A Renga from The Writers’ Block

in poetry •  7 years ago 

This Renga developed over many week as the poets at The Writers’ Block battled it out to write the verses which would be selected for this collaborative poem.

 
After our first renga delved into the science fiction genre it should have been little surprise that the one we are presenting here proceeded down a fantasy path.

@thinknzombie won the hokku and has the honour of deciding to which charity the SBD payout of this post will be delivered. He has chosen @youarehope.

So pull your chair up close by the fire and ready yourself for an adventure.

@damianjayclay

The One Within



Rising from the mist
triumphant –
the magic mountain.

Its icy cap, crowning slopes,
caves of gold and dark creatures.

Scales sliding
across rocky slopes –
a beast awaits its prey.

In jealous darkness,
mounds of copper, gold and bones.

From the haunts of man
awaits a cold saviour,
bearing a birthmark of ash.

The beast fears the prophecy:
'A man unburnt by the flames.'

The son of steel and fire,
brandishing his blade
fearlessly on the warpath.

At mountain's edge he takes a breath,
then descends through sulfurous caves.

The beast detects
the smell of man and
prepares his breath of flames.

With a heave, the dragon spits his might.
The warrior braces as fire tickles, unharming.

For fire is light.
Where the tunnel begins,
only fear burns.

The beast retreats among shiny things.
In warrior’s eyes – cold certainty.

The elders believed,
an empty husk would douse the fire.
Once cinder, now coal.

The true magic lies in the sacred blade.
It becomes black ice as he nears the beast.

There is no beast but the one within
that vanishes only when we are free.
So those chained to the past must let go.

Icy blade bites, dragon fangs taste man flesh,
locked in endless embrace within the mountain's heart.


Contributors:

@thinknzombie
@diebitch
@bex-dk
@anikekirsten
@damianjayclay
@jonknight
@tinypaleokitchen
@negativer
@steemedchitty
DS BrokenDreams

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So @damianjayclay, when does the next Renga begin? I miss it.

After Camp Nano :)

It would be a fun distraction beside nano.

  ·  7 years ago Reveal Comment

This was so much fun being part of and looking forward to the next Renga! Sci-fi, then fantasy... wonder what's next?

steampunk?

Oh, that would be fun! Come, let us collude.

This is a thrill to read, guys. You are all talented, amazing writers. Until I got involved in The Writers Block, I never would have imagined that a group could turn out such beautiful work. I hope to participate in Renga sometime!

I love it <3