Into the night
Embrace the nothing
Absent sight
what you were told
what you know
all lies of the old
words of wisdom
New life will be
granted in my kingdom
Beautiful walls
lined in gold
Be a good follower
do as you're told
many years ago
Come with me now
we must go
It is unsafe
in this alley
Follow me child
to my loving valley
to a world unkind
I will guide you
now that you're blind
Good work! It has an ominous feeling to it that I really enjoy. I'm a big fan of the last line :)
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Thank you! I love hearing that others enjoy my work. That's actually the first thing I wrote, and built on from there.
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liked your work
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Glad you enjoyed!
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upvoted and commented hope to see you on my post :)
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Thanks for minnow boosting @bien's post bro, much appreciated for your kind generosity!
This poem is so powerful, I wish I could record and Audio version of it, it is epically beautiful and so full of truth and life and love, thank you for sharing this one.
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No problem! Always happy to help a fellow steemian when I can, after all that's what Steemit is all about. I'm glad you enjoyed my work. Thank you for the comment!
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You're most welcome, yes again beautiful literary piece it resonated with my spirit and soul. God bless bro
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