Poetry Slam Challenge #8 Challenge- My entry

in poetry •  8 years ago 

 If I ruled the world


I'd give it all back


For it is not in my nature to rule anything but my own spirit 

And sometimes I cannot even manage to do that


If I ruled the world


There'd be a power vacuum created by my swift exit 


Allowing for the human journey to be carried out, unfettered by a dictator, good or bad 

A natural law where an experience can be uncoerced

If I ruled the world


You wouldn't have a philosopher king  


You wouldn't have a force against you contorting your desires and corrupting your thoughts with preselected leadership


You wouldn't have a presence monitoring your soul 

Or a false messiah looking down at your
existence  

If I ruled the world, I wouldn't 

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Wow. Fabulous poem. Great writing and imagery. Will follow you.

Thanks!

fantastic poem - love the beginning esp

Thanks, man. Kind of like your name says.

I told you, cuz. You keep posting, you'll get results. Congrats on the nice work!

Love it

I'm so excited to see you went ahead and put an entry in, this is some fine poetry! I know you're new, but you may want to take a look at tagging so this work can be properly seen by the community :)

"ifiruledtheworld" as a tag doesn't help get this out there much, and to have your poem show up in the poetryslamchallenge feed you want to tag it as such (don't worry this time, I'll make sure this entry doesn't get forgotten).

Just a few tips to encourage. Great work, glad to have you in the challenge !

Thanks for the tips!

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