RE: When I Fall - An Original Poem - Steemit Exclusive ( A new Experimental Piece hope you like it :P )

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When I Fall - An Original Poem - Steemit Exclusive ( A new Experimental Piece hope you like it :P )

in poetry •  7 years ago 

I really like it @angelveselinov. The frequency of your use of "I" is completely warranted, it is called "When I fall", after all!

I found every verse provoked some memory or thought, and I particularly liked the last half. Especially "Two like me will rise", it made me think that it would be "someone like me" who would help me up.

Also the imagery from; "I fly to meet the ground" is inspired. Great piece, thank you!

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      ·  7 years ago 

    I am flattered that you liked it. You look like you know your poetry. If you want come and join us we are a new group for poets and poetry lovers. Here is the link if you are interested. https://discord.gg/665VTUs Thanks for stopping by it was pleasure meeting ya.

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