RE: My Bad, Poetry (The Colour Grey) | Flies

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My Bad, Poetry (The Colour Grey) | Flies

in poetry •  6 years ago 

That boy struck me as waiting to die, overun by despair, corruption, filthiness and so many other pests come to feed on suffering. He saves the energy he'd spend on shoo ing a fly away, for the intensive act of lifting a spoon of fly-covered meal to his lips, if he were to live until then. I think you have captured those filthy opportunists, the flies, perfectly in your cleverly written poem.

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Exactly ;D Thanks again as always for reading @trumanity !