The New Era

in poetry •  7 years ago 


Knowing what we didn't before
We push further
Not knowing what is in store
We push further

The progress of man
and women alike
turn the wheels of time
like those of a bike

We fall into cycles
We do not like to admit
We fall into cylces
Because we do not commit

But if we changed our ways
And took what we knew
We could see better days
In the Era of New

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Again your poetry takes my breath away. My take on this poem is that your subject matter is life the new-era, from a practicale perspective, and how we respond to life. Rising in the midst of all your work is your spirit of youth that shouts "the new generation is not coming, we are here and we are claiming territory and we will not make the mistakes of our elders." And to it all I say, BRAVO!!!!!

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        ·  7 years ago 

      I really appreciate your analysis of my poetry. I look forward to looking previewing some of your work. :)

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Very nice!

        Up-voted :-)

        RightWithin

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Really nice and smooth

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