"Star, Imagination & Hope" - A Broken Heart Poetry.

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)


Under the darkness In starry Night

I stared at the brightest star 

I looked at it expectantly

As if it were you


All the time

I try to always understand my heart

But it was all still my imagination

My heart calling her name


But she didn't hear it 

Because my heart has been silent

Maybe I was too hopeful

Too far away for caught the star


Me and my smile 

Dumb and disappointed

The dreams and hopes

Lost in the blink of an eye.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Your poem is ringing in my mind like the bright melody, even if it's not optimistic in the end. Dreams are changing, we are changing every day! Hopes will grow back, like tulips under the sun :)

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Thank you so much for reading my poem, i following you, nice to meet you @vee.nathalee . Regards.

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Thank you! You have a follow back! I really like your work.

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            ·  7 years ago 

          i like your work too!

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