Spoken Word Poetry - The Peace on Terror (Original Poem/Video)

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

Hey guys! This is my first introductory attempt at a spoken word poetry reciting one of my original poems.

I hope you all enjoy, and can resonate with these words and reflect on what this poem is all about.

I'd really appreciate any form of feedback to improve my next video.

Thank you!

<3

Words to the poem can be found in my previous post here: https://steemit.com/poetry/@viazenar/the-peace-on-terror-original-poem

Or by request via comments

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

wonderful poem. Would be a great entry for Steemit Poetry Slam (Rewards contest!). Nice to meet you!
OH, and for feedback on the video: I would be better if you didi not hold the camara, I think.

Thank you so much!! I really appreciate the feedback. Yes I was thinking the same thing also :) I'll definitely check out the poetry slam contest.

This contest might also be for you POETRY CONTEST: Runaway Rhymes 5: Fiction Depiction - Steemit is a wonderful place for poets.

Awesome. Thank you again :) this makes me excited! If you come across anything else please let me know.

Just check the Tag poetry and the Tag contest regulary and visit my profile I take part in many creative contests. Have fun!

nice idea! :)

Thank you!

This is great. If I could upvote it twice I would.

Thank you so much 🙏

Wow great poem! You are awesome! Upvoted and followed you hope you can follow me too. Cool avatar as well

Thank you so much 🙏 I love your avatar too!

Thanks!

Hello and welcome to Steemit! I wish you a ton of good read, heaps of fun and lots of inspiration! Just do it :) Also have fun reading my blog!
Best,
@velimir

This was very touching. I followed to see more of your great content!

Thanks so much :) I'll be uploading more of my spoken poetry next week!

Awesome! I'll make sure to check it out!

as you see for yourself video version of your poem perform much better than the text one! :) keep it up

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Yep I've noticed that! Looks like more videos will be on their way :)