Often beauty is found in the most basic aspects of nature. Overlooked, but once seen, you can never forget it. One night, I watched a sunset where the sun danced with the sea.
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The Day That Danced With The Sea
The sun did the tango with the sea
The waves made the melody
And the moon was the backup band
Serenity leads to divinity
Love leads to peace
The clouds fill the scene
The wind plays it's part by softening the heart
Blown off course, but the stars guided me back
They danced until the night arrived
Removing the sun like an overprotective parent
The sea still danced partner-less
At least she can still see his reflection off the moon.
She made the waves, wave!
Thinking, "the dawn can't come too soon".
Thank you for reading.
Let me know your thoughts in the comments below.
The strength of you hyperbole in lines 10 and 13, swept me off my feet! Baby, you are good!!
I loved every line of this poem... Simple, beautiful, grand.
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Thank you very much, I wonder if anyone will notice things like that. It means a lot for you to read and point it out. I appreciate it, and your kind words. Hope you have a great day.
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Nature is at its most bewitching when sensitively witnessed with a loving eye.
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That is the truth. Loved how you said it too. Thanks for your support on my poetry.
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Hey walkingkeys you are welcome, your poetry rocks. More than happy to support it!
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It's very lovely poetry. Thanks for sharing this.
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You are more than welcome. Thank you for reading. You got a new follower
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i will follow you too
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Wow, nice poem bro,.. Steem on, roll on, am with you...
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Thinking of creating a Steemit poem site, what do you think?....can we partner?
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That sounds awesome! I'm pretty freaking busy just trying to keep up with my four post a day goal. I could help and write for it, but I don't have time to run something like that right now. Thanks though. If you do start, I'd love to help.
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Ok bro...
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keep the good works on bro (steem on)...
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really good
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Thank you kind sir
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nice
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Thanks
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nice poem again
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Thank you!
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