A Reflective Haiku

in poetry •  7 years ago 

A day's end
The sun dips
My last sunset

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I think it is interesting how you can switch the order of the lines.

I personally would've placed the first line last. Or switched one line out, any but the middle one, really.

The sun dips
the day rests—
My last sunset.

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