Omniscient (Original Poem)

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

In the deafening noise of my suffering
I hear your silence
And when I wince and fearfully shield my eyes
I see you are not there
I have become numb
But I feel the absence of your touch
In my presence, the stench on hopelessness reeks
But it’s a scent so familiar, I can no longer recognise it

And I cry
What was my offence?
And I cry
Where is my defence?

But in all this
I sense your gaze is fixed on me
I won’t taste defeat.

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      ·  7 years ago 

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Good man lets push it. Let's follow each other and upvote.

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          ·  7 years ago (edited)

        This has a lot of despair in it. It sounds like there is a hurting heart holding the pen on this poem. I hope it's just art, and you are ok, little brother! <3 It ends on a strong note though! Feel that strength! Own it!

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            ·  7 years ago 

          I'm doing great!! I wrote this a few years ago but it's purely art don't worry

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              ·  7 years ago 

            Whew, crisis averted!

            :D You should come join us in the PAL minnow support project discord chat sometime my friend, I think you would make many good friends and connections in our insane 3600 member group!

            its fun too!

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                ·  7 years ago 

              Thanks a lot!! I'll definitely take a look

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                Can't wait to see you there, it's a friggin' riot most of the time!

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