The Island, Episode 5 (Sudden Death)steemCreated with Sketch.

in poetry •  7 years ago 

The island is a rhyming adventure, where YOU choose what happens next! Simply read the episode, and then post what you think should come next as a comment. The comment that gets the most votes will become part of the story. Catch up on previous episodes by visiting #TheIsland

All suggestions will be put into a random number generator. One will be chosen as fatal. More suggestions mean more chances of survival.

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Previously
You're sure you see its finger twitch...
...Good lord. What's next? An island witch!?

Episode 5
You wish that hadn't crossed your mind,
For just beyond the hand, you find
A swirling mass of dark green hair
And a face that's fixed you with a stare

You scream, and try to swim away
But something grabs you, makes you stay
The sea witch rises from the sand...

Write your final line suggestion in the comments, and then vote for your favourite suggestion. You might want to check back in for new suggestions later - especially if you're the first to post! But beware... the story moves on every 24 hours. The comment with most votes will decide where the story goes next.

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Has a hidden surprise to hand.

"Release me!" is your one demand

Your suggestion got used in tonight's episode!

You kneel and bow with outstretched hand.

I've probably come too late to the party to contend, but I've been busy lately.

Nah I couldn't get online last night to update the next episode so you're in time. Could do with finding some people to vote as tie breakers though!

The RNG picked your suggestion as the DEATH option. Good job @danmaruschak got one more vote...

Affirming that you're surely damned.

Her hand is what you demand

Her hand in marriage?

You can twist that as you wish rofl but ha-ha sure why not go for it ^^
Maybe the Sea-Witch is his type and just you know wants a love

ik its more then 24h ....but still...

...her eyes as dull as a barren land.