Some back story to all of this.
I met an amazing person many, many years ago and have only recently (if two years can be seen as recently) realized how awesome she is...
I'm not sure as to what her take on me is but everytime I see her I die... And speaking to her is so damn hard because I don't want to be an idiot.
This poem is how I feel when I text her :)
P.S. if you one day read this don't run and hide 😂😂
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Two steps down the corridor.
My mind is going crazy.
Two steps in reverse.
The thought of you's a bit dazy.
Three steps to the left.
I'm burning up inside.
Three steps to the right.
There's too much excitement to hide.
A jump into the air.
I couldn't care less if people stare.
A loud thump on the ground.
I feel as though I can never be bound.
I can wait no longer.
Do you feel the same?
I wonder?
By Ethan
2018/01/15
Note: If there are any spelling errors or things you disagree with, I would appreciate it if you let me know :)
Thanks for reading, I hope you enjoyed! If you did and want to hear more you can follow me here (^~^) <(^~^<)
Im sure she feels the same mate, who can resist you!!! <3 XD
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A LOT OF PEOPLE XD
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Who hasn't been here! That feeling like you can barely keep your feet on the ground...
Which is why I love the way the thought process is measured by the actual footsteps taken in this poem. Things are moving forward toward something... GOOD, the reader can't help but hope. Either way, an answer ;)
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ps: "if you one day see this don't run and hide" is too awesome and sweet :)
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I'll probably show it to her this week end... I don't know how it's gonna go
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Whoah! Scary. Love is something you have to be so ridiculously brave for.
Everyone who tries is heroic IMO
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But it is good to have an answer, when you feel ready :)
It seems to me like this poem would be hard to resist...
I'm rooting for you my friend :)
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Hey @xxsenpaixsamaxx, check out this daily series I'm doing (the last two in particular I think you might like).
These poems are adapted from an art book I made awhile back.
https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/animals-a-daily-series-of-poems-with-illustrations-by-bennettitalia
https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/5uks3e-animals-a-daily-series-of-poems-with-illustrations-by-bennettitalia
https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/3tnvz2-animals-a-daily-series-of-poems-with-illustrations-by-bennettitalia
https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/6a2wqb-animals-a-daily-series-of-poems-with-illustrations-by-bennettitalia
https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/5rzypz-animals-a-daily-series-of-poems-with-illustrations-by-bennettitalia
https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/2gzejy-animals-a-daily-series-of-poems-with-illustrations-by-bennettitalia
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and here's a picture for you:
https://steemit.com/art/@bennettitalia/robot-love-a-drawing-by-bennettitalia-c-2018-bennett-italia
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A Very beautiful piece, creative and lovely.
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makes me excited just reading this, always worth the read
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Thanks bud, I appreciate it :)
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It's a very beautiful poem, you have an amazing way to express your feelings. Also, I love the same things you do, anime and poetry! I just created this account and I'd like to post my own poetry but I'm not exactly sure how to start. Do you have any advice?
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Introduce yourself and then let the feelies find their own wheelies :)
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I thought a lot about it and I found courage to do it! I hope to keep seeing more about you, thank you for the inspiration
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Its really cool you feel this way for someone. Its always sweet when you let your feelings hard..good luck with her mate.. and btw, I have seen the anime you used for this post..nice stuff
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The best way to describe one's feelings! The immortal words.
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Two steps down the corridor.
My mind is going crazy.
Two steps in reverse.
The thought of you's a bit dazy.
That part got my atention, keep it up mate.
Upvoted
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The love consuming but the situation compounding.
Break the ice and talk to her man
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I do 😂😂 but I'm not very socially inclined due to past experiences.
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Nice poem! 👍😊
#noragami 😍
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Be your beautiful self :).
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I know what this means.
Guess this is what pushed me to writing poetry cos on paper I could say EVERYTHING I've ever wanted to say to her.
Now, folks call me a poet but they dunno that fear birth my first ink spill.
Thanks for sharing bro.
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Good poem, if you love someone say it, may love you too, maybe for lack of courage we can not conquer the love of our life, thanks for ur vote on my last comment senpai sama u help me alot!
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Yeah its interesting..hahaha.. You are really very inspired by her.. I also wana see that person who is so much inspiring and having deep long term affects on sommeone
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i enjoy your post ^^! Thanks.
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good!.
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happy today for you!
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Amazing peom mate. Simply beautiful
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I love the dynamics of the poem! I wonder why you used yatogami for this?
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Do you like animation? What?
Let's be friends by all means ♪
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Amazing peom mate,so interesting
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Nice poem man, I guess I know how you feel so I wish you the best of luck :)
By the way, I wish I was that poetic, if you keep this up you might even be able to impress her ^^
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💕💕💕 hahahaha. Love is in the air~~ so cuteeee. Love it @xxsenpaixsamaxx! She'd be amazed if she would ever read this! Kawaii~~^^
(P.s. and that anime tho, Noragami, is very niceeee. Yatoo 😍)
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XD I will show her my work one day, when she is mine and not able to be scared away :D
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Aweee hahahaha. Best of lucks to you! Fighting! 😊
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Written so well, mate.
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Hi - and my belated wishes for the new year.
A jump into the air.
I couldn't care less if people stare.
Stared changes the tense, like causing a glitch in the reading of it...peopled is not what you mean - it means there were people...
Gosh, you are worse than me, I wasted an entire year before telling the girl I care...
Once you've answered, I'll delete the correction suggestion
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Thank you, you don't have to delete the suggestion :D . I knew that she was important to me but it was only this December that I really understood just how important, I won't waste any more time keeping feelings to myself :D I actually plan on taking her out this weekend, which is a good chance to tell her my feelings.
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very like: D
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I love the picture. Yato God!
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my favorite anime is noragami <3
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Good
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