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This image doesn't really relate much to the poem but it's the type of person I am and thought it pretty neat.
An interesting day went by,
I met with you and time flew,
I wish I had a few more hours to spend,
I wish today didn't have to end.
I feel as though I worsened the situation in a way,
I hadn't slept well and was grouchy all day,
I was distant and despondent,
I didn't truly appreciate today's content.
I'll make it up to you,
I really want a redo,
I hope you'll want one too...
Adieu.
By Ethan
2018/01/15
Note: If there are any spelling errors or things you disagree with, I would appreciate it if you let me know :)
I feel the same way, today, @xxsenpaixsamaxx. Thank goodness, tomorrow is always a chance to start, again, and people who know us and really care will always understand...
Since you gave us permission to correct your typos, here are a couple that I caught (as an editor for over 20 years, I can't help spot these things...)
"despondent" is with an e
"today's" needs an apostrophe to show possession
Wishing you a restful night's sleep :)
Yahia
PS - Here is a poem of mine that I just posted, on the power of imagination, that you might enjoy:
https://steemit.com/poetry/@yahialababidi/the-night-and-its-bewitching-might-where-poets-dream-and-cry-original-poem
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Thank you for the corrections :) and for the uplifting message!
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You're very welcome, dear Ethan @xxsenpaixsamaxx You're a poet of love, which also means of Hope. As I say in one of my books, If Love were not always a step ahead, how would it ensure we kept up the chase?
Have a wonderful week ahead!
Yahia
PS - Have you thought of using @dsound to record/read your poetry? Here's my 1st attempt :) https://steemit.com/dsound/@yahialababidi/the-night--its-bewitching-might--original-poetry-reading
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A Very beautiful piece, creative and lovely.
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You are talented. Good luck with your poems!
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Wow, this poem is so beautiful.
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The complexity of human relationships are starkly seen in your poem. I always enjoy anime.
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It's a perfect poem with nicely picked rhymes in the first few lines.
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good i like anime pic
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" It is okay not to be okay. "
https://steemit.com/life/@suprspidobatman/it-is-okay-not-to-be-okay-part-2
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Tienes mi voto porfavor pasa por mi post
Y dame tu voto
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Sometimes you cant help but wish for the power to freeze time and make the best of specific moment. Beautifully penned...
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Wow that picture was sad to read.
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Kakashi likes this
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Love both of the pic and the poem. ^^~ Don't worry, today might've been a mess but there's always a tomorrow. You can always do it better next time. :) That person would understand, we all have that kind of moody days anyway, after all we're just humans.^^ Great poem desu, can somewhat relate to it.^^~ Subarashii desuu~~
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There's always not enough time and time seems to fly when it's fun. Nice one. Kindly check out this poem of mine here. Sure you'd love it
https://steemit.com/poem/@reservedsingle/these-hearts-of-ours
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An interesting day
you've lost in a way.
nice post buddy
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nice work !nice work i will follow u:) check up mine
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REALLY good my friend I truly felt this one hit home. I always enjoy your stuff
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I've already Resteemed it,
@racoo
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I really like this piece but sorry to point this out "An interesting day went by,
I met with you and time flew" would be better if it was "An interesting day went by,
I met with you and oh how time flies" i know you wanted by and fly to rhyme but it couldnt work because it wouldnt be grammatically correct....in cases like that..i just change the structure of the sentence....
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I usually do just that, but recently I have had a number of editors and authors tell me not to...
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well...in that case...i should probably stop too, thanks
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go and educate yourself before you use such terms. you are flagged for this.
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