An ironic scene
They're holding hands but he's lost his eye's gleam
She whispers so lovingly in his ears
But she no longer feels their cheer
She's grinning from ear to ear
Her smile hides so much fear
He holds her tight
He knows there's nothing about all this that is right
She feels the difference
He can see the separation
Both of them still together
Out of shear desperation
He can't afford to lose her
She can't live without him
But both have toxic storms
Brewing within
There's nothing left for either of them
Only an empty cast
They now both walk on broken glass
They can see the pain
They can feel the scars
They refuse to quit and try again
There's just to many memories from the past
They are both dumb
Numb to the fact that it's over
There's no new development
They should try to find a new settlement
By Ethan
2017/10/11
that was a great poem. well done @xxsenpaixsamaxx
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excellent writing
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yes it was great
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fantastic written work
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yes such a great poem
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wao excellent poem , Only a few people have a skill that they write any paragraph thinking in the form of poem ... Very nice keep it continue
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Very good and very interesting poem.
Goodjob.
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poetry is the mirror of life
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brilliant poem
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That's the part when nothing is the same, when already the feelings don't have the same intensity as before, when nothing is ever the same. Very good poem!
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ya it was awesome
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La verdad, me pareció muy interesante. El hecho de que la imagen esté en blanco y negro, se refleja el miedo, ese vacío que ambos sientes, ese brillo de sus miradas perdida. Un sentimiento que no quiere terminar, que busca la manera de seguir y revivir esa llama de pasión. Te felicito amigo.
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Thank you very much :D I am glad you liked it :) I don't know how to speak Spanish so I translated it and what you said is spot on, this image was perfect for the poem :)
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Sənə məktub yazıram, yazıram ki bağışla...
Burda hava pis keçir, ara vermir yağışlar..
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It's really hard to call it something. Marvelous!
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You r very nice very good blog
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They were really nice words! thankyou @xxsenpaixsamaxx
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I loved the poem! So beautiful❤️
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Very well written. Yes! And thanks you!
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@Xx you still love her yeah?
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I'm just a watcher
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Fanastic stuff here, i love it.
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Great read xxsenpaixsamaxx
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that was really great work! very well done @xxsenpaixsamaxx
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I felt my eyes moistened after reading this.
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Great poem friend <3
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Sad but beautiful.
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wah great
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