Poem / A Grim Realization

in poetry •  7 years ago 

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A grim realization

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A grim realization
Made it's way into my imagination
I realized that I have run out of time
There's no one left to comfort my mind

I had this thought about for a while
I had come to this conclusion several periods after
I saw that I hadn't met anyone new
And the only way I would was if I changed schools

There was really no one left
That had not buried me in the friend rift
There was no one I could be compatible with
That was my age, that would stop my breath

I came to another conclusion
I don't need the couple-ly delusion
I'm actually quiet content with my situation
I'm happy being alone at my work stations
I don't need anyone to complete me
Not having to rely on others will keep me clean

I haven't really been in anything serious
And I guess that's probably why
I don't need that title :Taken Guy
I like being lonely and mysterious
I don't need any one else
I can complete myself

One day when I move to a new place
I will find someone that will gravitate in my space
But at the moment I don't mind
Having peace and quiet and a whole lot of time
What I can do now is better myself
So one day when I find her, she'd want me all to herself

By Ethan
2017/09/04

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Congrats on your achievements here Ethan! :) Making my way there though I am seemingly using slow motion :D

@xxsenpaixsamaxx upvoted master..love your poem..kindly see mine too?
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your upvote is very much appreciated and more power to your poem..
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CONGRATS!

just amazing .. thanks

Wuaoooo increible, muy buen poema jjjj

Saludos desde Ecuador :)

Yes Enjoyed! Now Enjoy my up vote.

great poem!

very great poem
iam very like it
steem on :)

Nice poem, thanks for sharing

So sweet poem is very nice and very interesting I like your poem.
Thanks for sharing this post.
Thanks friend.

Nice poem! Keep it up sir :)
I love the image too

I might be looking at this in an odd way but masterful use of the image. The anime " Garden of Words " I feel personifies such lines as "There was no one I could be compatible with
That was my age, that would stop my breath" and your lines about the realization you made that you didn't need anyone to complete you ( something I think was brought home during the last scene of the film, personally ). Anyways just wanted to stop by and say keep up the good work. I appreciate your work.

I use images that suit, Garden of Words was a very good example of how I was feeling, I had come to a stage were I just sat alone at a bench to think and The age difference also had me thinking. I'm glad you noticed :)

Beautiful Ethan. Your poem is so true. I believe we all need to first be comfortable with ourselves before the next step. I use to feel that I needed someone to complete me but I also learned the hard way that others cannot complete our own being. I have since grown and have become wiser and deeper in my perceptions of life. When you are comfortable with yourself you then can radiate that confidence and essence that draws others to you. It is like a magnet that intrigues others because you know who you are. Beautiful poem Ethan. I love the growth I am seeing in you!!!! :D

awesome. thanks

Very cool poetry. It's important to realize, that you're self-sufficient person.

Like it and upvoted! 😊