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I wish you were back
I wish that you never left
I know it's only two weeks
But I'm missin' your cute cheeks
I just wanted to go on another date
Because you feel like my fate
I know you'll be back soon
But my hearts stuck in place
Like a malfunctioning traffic boon
I just want to eliminate this space
This might all be one sided
But I can't help it
My heart fells like it's being guided
You have such an amazing aura
You smell like 1st grade flora
You are so interested in cats
I can't wait till you're back
I want to get to know you
Down to the finest details
In your favorite shoes
If you continue you might spill my heart's entrails
You've been in the background of my life
But your presence is standing out
I never noticed you before
But now you've got my heeling like a dog on the floor
When you get back I hope you'll smile
Take up my offer and stick around for a while
I'll do my best to keep you around
To keep your heart rooted in my ground
By Ethan
2017/07/09
I love your poem. Resteemed, Up'd and followed.
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Thank you :)
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No problem, hope to see more of your poetry.
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I post one every day ☺
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Sweet poem :)
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I enjoyed that ...very sweet upvoted and following :) :) Kayleigh
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Thank you ☺
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You're very welcome :) :) keep writing and sharing !!
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thanks for your talent
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I also write too, I wish I could write as good as u
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you write better than I do but only as good as you do :)
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It's too beautiful once again..
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Thanks man
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Pleasuring.
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Very good poetry awesome skills😍😍😍
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Thank you :)
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Awesome
I really like this
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Hi! I wish to have talent do write a poem too! Very inspiring! Thanks!
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you do just try it
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Very sweet poem... I hope she comes back!
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Thank you
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Wonderful poem dear thanks for sharing waiting for your another poem :)
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Great poem!
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Great Work! cheers! :)
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In the words of Al Sharpton, Nice Rhymes
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That’s a great poem thanks a lot for sharing and keep on posting ;)
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Thank you :)
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This is a good post, I really like it. Hopefully the next post is better than this. Thank you already share. And thank you too, If you get time, to see my post today and upvote and like it I'm very grateful.
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Thank you I will ☺
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Beautiful as always! I love your poems. :)
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Your poem made me do Awww. I hope she comes back ;-)
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Thank you, she's coming back next week I think
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Great. :)
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Dude, hope you find your love or get over it.
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How I feel about Mary Jane. Thanks for sharing.
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NO problem bro ☺
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Powerful, saddening, inspiring. The Steemit poetry legend continues. Thanks for sharing as usual!
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I'm not that much of a legend XD thank you for your support ☺
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Your poem calls out to her, laying everything out. Longing, hope, shows that you still care. There are no words to tell you anything that will help. Only can send you expressions of support and tell you time will give you a direction.
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Very true, when she gets back I'm hoping to be able to court her correctly ☺
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I really liked your poem, nice to meet you @xxsenpaixmaxx
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nice
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Where'd you go?
I miss you so
Seems like it's been forever
That you've been gone
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'Sbeen so long
I've forgotten the sound of your song
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