Poem / Five Word For Sale

in poetry •  8 years ago  (edited)

Five Words For sale

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Five words for sale
A sign hung above my head
Five words everyone needs
The sign read

I sat at here in my seat
I dressed my self this morning
Looking presentable and neat

The five words I was selling
Were really under priced
They have no comprehensible value
But are the aromatic spices of life

First: live
Live while you are alive
Don't be stupid
Don't waste time

Second: compassion
Be compassionate to your fellow species
Care for all
Take upon you their worries

Third: share
Share what you've learnt
Share the stories of how you where burnt
It's the easiest relief
Make use of it to free you from grief

Fourth: Love
Love all that you find
No matter what they do
Even if they were unkind
Love with all you have
Both the good and the bad

Fifth: Endure
Endure all you trials
They where given to you for a reason
Nothing more than you can handle
Just keep breathing

By Ethan
2017/07/17

Apologies for not posting anything related to my series, I will resume writing very soon :)

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Thanks for reading, I hope you enjoyed! If you did and want to hear more you can follow me here ^-^ <(^~^<)

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Nice post. Very creative. Love poems. Good work and good content. Will continue to follow. Enjoyed your post.

Thank you :D

Your welcome. Stay in touch. Will follow and look out for you.

Five great words !
Very nice poem @xxsenpaixsamaxx
Keep steeming.

The style that you wrote your poem in really makes the presentation of it stand out.

Thank you, I went for a reader friendly format :)

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Upvoted, followed!

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Will do, Thanks for your support :)

Awesome poetry,

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It's really good :)

  ·  8 years ago (edited)

Glad you like it. You can write beautiful poetry and i enjoyed to illustrate poetry xD

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Thanks mate, I will check out your stuff as well :)

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I will resteem it for you :)

i really enjoyed this poem and your style of writing @xxsenpaixsamaxx

Thank you :)

Quite brilliant

A sing hung above my head

Did you mean sign here?

thank you :|

I really enjoyed your poems, especially the one named share. I think you are really talented in making these. Just keep doing it!

Thank you :D

My dude......This was good! Like crazy good!

How you flow'd into the 5 words was perfect:)

Thank you :D

To live, to have compassion, to share, to love and to endure are beautiful elements of being. Your poem was touching and thought provoking. I do believe that these 5 words have deep meaning and are necessary parts of our lives to finding happiness, growth and meaning. Thank-you for your beautiful creative post......Cabbagepatch

Thank you, I like these five words in particular, they have a lot of meaning to me...

good post
plise followback..

thanks for this post it was an interesting read too

  ·  8 years ago (edited)

Five words to live by! Nice poem @xxsenpaixsamaxx! Thanks for sharing :)

Thanks man, I haven't been able to read much lately, would you send me the links of your work when you post :)

Great poem and uplifting message. Prese check out my stuff. If really love to know what you think. Here is my last submission...

https://steemit.com/poetry/@protius-musicus/greed

I think this is really inspiring and I really like it's simplistic style. Thumps up!

very witty. love it

I enjoyed reading your poem. I haven't written any poetry in a long while. I hope reading creative minds like yours will reignite my flame. Meanwhile I just started this series blogging Poems I Wrote As A Kid.

I'll appreciate if you can read and give your appraisal 😊

I will do when I have time :)

Very poignant verse which makes good points to remember. Harder some times than others, I know. Thank you for sharing.

Followed, upvoted, and resteemed.

Thank you :)

Very interesting! The first word, live, really stands out to me! Well done. :) Thank you for sharing

Very good writing

A very beautiful poem @xxsenpaixsamaxx
Simplicity at its best. Peace and Love to you. Have upvoted.

My poem - a plea to compassion

Thank you, I appreciate it :)

Very well written! I am new on Steemit... Could you tell me how I should share my poetry with the community? I just posted one of my original poems: https://steemit.com/poetry/@time2win/tones-of-black-and-blue
Thank you!