In My Head
What's in my head
Containing light and dark matter
A galactic imagination
My thoughts a marvelous innovation
How it all fits together
The biology between electric waves
In my skull is tethered
That reforms my mind everyday
It resets in my sleep like a black hole
Information is drawn in and disappears
Pain and anger turn to regret
I make it my mission to forgive and forget
I'm lost in the space
Between the speckles of light
The many memories
The most important thoughts
That Make up my minds melodies
And is my creativity's source
A finite definition
Of life's impermanence and imposition
Spins within my mind
It's a constant reminder to never waste time
I'm at a loss for words
The soul inside feels burnt
I can't portray the way I feel
The words needed to describe aren't real
It's a mix of emotion
A yin and yang of mellow and enraged
I think I need some time off center stage
I feel like a comet
Orbiting to close breaks off pieces
A light display of amazement
That end life and destroy species
The good within can only be seen
Be the eyes of those who dream
The bad is more than transparent
It's seen by all, it makes me aberrant
By Ethan
2017/06/21
It's poems like this the stirs my system to be a poet. Your piece has touched the core of my soul and i think I'm capable of doing marvelous things right now. Our brains are so powerful and we need to make the most of it. Your poem reminds me that I can't waste time on frivolous things but start something worthwhile right now. I love your piece and hope to right like this some day
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Thank you ♥ If you find a source of inspiration or you have pent up emotions poetry is the right way to go, you can express so much through word, I'm glad I was able to reach out to you. If you do ever post up any literature feel free to drop me a link ☺
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I'll gladly do so man. I'm really touched.
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Thank you, I hope you have a successful week further :)
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Thanks
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Hmmm I like your poem. It is such an awesome piece describing your thoughts with the words. They were telling me the galaxy of your mind. I have to stop for a moment to imagine the picture after reading each line. You delighted me as well!
Thanks for sharing! Looking forward to see more of your poem!
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Thank you :D I'm so happy that I'm leaving the image I intend too :D
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very good I like it a lot
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Thank you :D
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😢 https://steemit.com/poetry/@anejosua/everyday-im-thinking-about-you-cause-i-love-you-and-forever-still-love-you
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inspiring poem, i wish i could write that well :)
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You can, it's all in your head, just find a way to put it on paper.
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Awesome Poem ,Inspiring also. innovations are the utmost requirements dear... Let the innovations come out. Emotions are the real status symbol of a person .. Loved the Poem
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Thank you ☺ It means a lot ;)
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Thank you :)
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This is great! Nice mixture of imagery and raw emotionality, with a mix of simple and complex terms. Are you a musician? It seems like this might make good lyrics for a song
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Thank you, I play piano and I sing a lot
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Heyyy me too! I actually studied Jazz piano in college. I haven't been playing as much lately though. I've been focusing on beatboxing
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I taught myself how to play, it's been an interesting journey
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It mewtwo ^_^
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(^.^)
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~<n_n>~
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What a great poem. I cant wait for your next one. Will you be making a new one soon? Kind regards from Amsterdam!
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I post one everyday... sometimes I skip when i find good photos to post ;)
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Ah thats great. keep up the good work!
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It's great to come across fellow poets, followed and upvoted!
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Thank you :)
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An ethereal verses that alludes our consciousness that conveys the message interstellar with its fifth dimensional perception!
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Thank you!
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You always amaze me by the intricate and spacial thinking that comes from you! Sometimes I think you are well beyond present time. I am proud that you are able to take from within and share it in the outer realm. I really love that you are able to feel and see the light and dark and how it inter-plays with each other. Kind of like yin and yang. Keep expressing, feeling and being so that you can find balance and a sense of purpose and satisfaction!......Cabbagepatch
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Your comments always make my day :) I'll keep it flowing
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Fine choice of words. Very thought provoking.
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Thank you!
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Heart touching poetry.
Yours is very nice post and very interesting I love to visit your blog. It includes useful postings. Thanks friend.
I love it.
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Thank you! I'm glad that it touched you and that you enjoy my posts :]
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it resets in my sleep like a black hole......
this level of creativity is awsome
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Thank you :D
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its a good piece the raw expressions make it seem like a new language is being born.
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Thank you, I love poetry for its simple ways of expressing feelings
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This blew me away. What you do with words is powerful.
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Thank you :) glad you enjoyed it!
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Mind boggling
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I love this, the sense of hope within the despair :)
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There's always a silver lining
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