Just You, Me and Reality pt 2
A weeks gone by
Her face has been scares
maybe I made her shy
By asking why?
Hi
A small whisper startles me
Hello
Haven't seen you in a while little one
I've had things that needed be done
I guess life continues on
Indeed, even when we don't want it to proceed
Why are you still here?
Why do you just stand staring into nowhere?
As I've said before
I stand here because I can
I stand here because I am no longer a man
I have an answer to your question
The reason I show my emotions
You are a fellow human
** And your life needs to resume**
I don't care about it
I've always had many doubts towards it
What is it that you need
To enable you to see?
I require something that you cannot give
You might be surprised be the terrors I've lived
I can assure you that you are not the right one
To save me from this downy song
Fine I will leave again
To find what you are needing
I will be back in a week
With whatever you need
Farewell again
I will play your little game
ErrrHmmmmm
I'm back with what I could find
I went into the depths of my mind
It took me sometime
And what is it you bring?
Does it have a venomousness sting?
Do you think and end to my suffering it will bring?
Just give me a minute
I just have to finish it
Close your eyes for a second
mmmmm
Open your arms
Don't worry I wont harm
I felt a warm embrace
And saw a smile on her bright face
What is your age?
Far to old to behold your face
I'm not kidding
Your persistence is annoying
A two and a four mixed in my mind
I've been around for some time
twenty four
That's not to bad
Why are you trying to stop me from being sad?
I'm 21
I guessed as much
Now please leave me to wallow in my sorrow
I'll see you again
Next time I will relieve your pain
Farewell once more
You can try your best to heal these sores
By Ethan
2017/08/28
Intrigued for how this will further enfold :)
If I may ask, would you say your work is based on (past) feelings you experience(d) yourself? Or is it all more balanced towards fiction? you say it's more fiction based.
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All the poems that aren't series are past experiences and the series are all fiction
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You have a good choice of Images, they help convey the message of your Poem...
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hi master xxsenpaixsamaxx upvoted your post..wow i love your poem..its amazing...you always inspired me alot..kindly see my post to and upvoted it..
https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/the-blupost-poem-look-unto-my-eyes
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You should write a book-
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lovely..
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good post
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I really enjoyed reading this poetry , I wish you could see my poem https://steemit.com/poetry/@mahmoudalrefaie/poem-in-my-soul-a-girl-p1
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its's a nice post ,,
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Real art from the depths of an artist heart^_^
What a nice poem you have! Thanks for sharing with us your talent
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I hope there is a part three. I'm quite intrigued by this story and how it will play out. Your poems are showing a slight element of hope which is nice. I hope you're adjusting with having to go back to school. I use to get depressed when we had to return to school but soon got into the routine. Have a good week ahead Ethan! :D
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I wnjoy school for the most part but it is really hectic and I have a tight schedule
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very nice ......... thank for shering
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Nice post thank for shering
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This is quite beautiful, heartfelt and captivating! Kudos!
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