Life's Quest
Once again I meet at the crossroad
One direction leading to happiness
The other to sorrow
I wish the All Mighties insight I could borrow
The quest we are all set upon at birth
As we are gifted with body to roam the earth
A journey filled with aches and pains
As we travel towards educating our brains
A race of sorts for some
While others try to act all dumb
Each of us have our own unique design
We may be malformed at first but give us time
Learning who we really are
Is something more tremendous than a burning star
We all set out on our life long mission
And in the end recieve our eternal commission
Note: If there are any spelling errors or things you disagree with, I would appreciate it if you let me know :)
By Ethan
2017/12/10
True , we control our lives by the decisions we take. Our tomorrow starts now.
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nice
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very decent poem! It is really good motivational poem.
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Reminded of a quote that says as the world is not designed for most people to be enlightened.
otherwise thanks i liked reading your poem
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The best thing is to enjoy the trip.
Enjoy the sorrows.
Enjoy the joys.
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amazing dude seriously
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we all have our gifts and how we use them. you are really good at yours. i wish i could write as well
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Friend, I really liked this part:
|Each of us have our own unique design
We may be malformed at first but give us time
Learning who we really are|
Me gustaría que pasaras a leer algo que escribí.
https://steemit.com/poem/@gabinart3/spaces
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Very touching. :)
"Each of us have our own unique design
We may be malformed at first but give us time
Learning who we really are
Is something more tremendous than a burning star"
These lines are what I love the most since it really does makes sense. And it's the truth. "The best of things take the longest time to be created." Very beautiful, Ethan. ^^~ Loved it!
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Inspiring words. Puts me in mind of Desiderata.
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