Poem / My Wolrd's End

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

My World's End

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I got some advice from a friend
He told me "Take your time. This isn't the end"
I knew what he said was true
But after that whole thing with you?

I thought on it for hours
Every second I wasted made me sour
I couldn't believe what I did for you
After all the things you put me through

I guess it's only right
Karma will catch up and deliver her bite
I don't wish for your downfall
I just hope that you treat the next one better than me
Cause after what I've seen
You need to change your self empowered imagery

I'm glad I had a person to lean on
After that fiasco I was feeling beat down
I thought that I would be more depressed
But you were never mine to begin with

For all the memories I had
For a little while I didn't feel bad
I'm grateful for the time we spent
Even though it was one sided I was hellbent

If it weren't for my good friend
I'd still be thinking of you as my worlds end.

By Ethan
2017/07/30

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Your poem is clearly about relationships, but also about possible other things. It makes me think of the rapture as I am big Christian.

jamie you like some poem..kindly check my poem too..https://steemit.com/funny/@mrblu/smile-and-look-at-me--blue-post-funny hope i made you smile on that..

It could be viewed in that way ;)

Very emotional. The artwork goes very good with it as well.

Thank you, I make an effort to try to match the art and the poems :)

Nice one there

Good job and another lesson learned. 😁

Bravo!!!

His writing is very good. I am happy with this paper and it is very useful for me. Read your writing as if I have just been hit by heavy rain after a very long dry season. My greetings from Aceh; @fahrilzubir.

Thank you I am glad you enjoyed it :)

really nice dear my vote is small thing for your post it deserve more :)

No matter how insignificant your vote is the fact that you read my poem make me glad enough :) Thank you!

Parting is always such sweet sorrow at the end of a love affair.

i liked it a lot, i can relate , great poem

Thank you :)

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Nice to see a lot poets here. And props to those who support poetry too. :)

I hope the time will come that even the simplest writers would be noticed too. Really it is consistency and hard work. My newfound love in poetry especially in haiku is a bit of underground as it is mostly in the crypto theme. And i'm loving it. :)

ANIME AND POETRY?
IT'S SUPER EFFECTIVE!
& you gained a new follower too. ;)

Thank you, Anime is one of my savors. Thus it relates to most of what I write ;)

The way you write fascinates me! Congratulations!

Thank you :)

awesome.........!! really great words:)

The life is full of lessons you have to understand it well. To be clever enough.
Thank you for this lines which touch my soul.
@creativewoman

It's my pleasure, I am grateful I was able to reach out and touch you :)

Healing poem!

A lucid indictment of your situation! Seems like you're being really honest with yourself. That type of approach is great for staying content no matter what life throws at you. I liked the simplicity and catchiness of your writing, especially the part about "never being mine to begin with." Anyway, have a great day! Cheers to your good friend that changed it from being the world's end!

I am very grateful for your support ♥ I think honesty in writing is the only way to deliver a meaningful poem :)

You're welcome :D I have heard the saying "write the poem that only YOU can write" meaning it comes deep from your own experiences that is totally unique.

Your poems are always carry so much emotion. They feel honest and real. I enjoy reading your work. Great write.

They feel so real because they are. I'm going through an area in time that freaking sucks and hurts so much. But writing is there for me :)

I hope things work themselves positive for you. It's good that you can use your writing as an outlet for your inner turmoil. Best wishes to you and Thank You for sharing of yourself on STEEMIT.

I am grateful for your support :)

very nice :)

Another beautiful poem always voted wish you the same check mine
https://steemit.com/poetry/@funnystuff/poem-ups-and-downs
Hope you like Takecare ❤

Will do, Thank you for your support :)

Wow this is so beautiful. It reminds me of Bring me The horizon for some reason (aka the band that saved my life literally). Youre an amazing writter. Keep it up!!! @xxsenpaixsamaxx

Thank you! Bring me the horizon carry so much emotion into their pieces, they are one of my favorite bands :)

Wow your answer made my day!!! I didnt even think you were gonna know them! Thats amazing! They are one of my faves too! Their lyrics are so profound and meaningful, it gets to my heart everytime! Which song is your favourite? Im always curious to ask ppl who know the band:P Cuz a song can say a lot about someone:) @xxsenpaixsamaxx

I like follow you, It relates a lot to how I feel when I find someone worth while, I don't have a specific favorite because all their songs are amazing. I also love can you feel my heart :)

Awwww thanks!!!! Can you hear the silence? Can you see the dark? Can you heal the broken? Can you feel my heart!!!! xxxxxx

Ethan, your poem was really, really good. I see a new growth in you and I am so proud of your ability to try to move on. Life is so hard but it will continue to give us challenges and life lessons. At my age, you would think that I have had a whole lifetime to learn, but no, I'm still given road blocks, pot hots and hard, hard lessons. But I am determine to keep walking down that path of life. Keep striving to be better and stronger. I know you will! Have a hopefully better week. :D

Thank you! My week is gonna be as good as I make it so I'll try my best, Thank you for your encouraging words ☺

nice poetry,,senpai kindly check my post also

https://steemit.com/funny/@mrblu/smile-and-look-at-me--blue-post-funny

really good poetry, its emotional and each line rhymes with the next .

Thank you, I try my best to keep the rhythm of the poems on par as far as I can :)

true, i believe thats what makes a good poetry .

In Croatia we say - jebena ti je pjesma :D

XD I had to translate it. It's pretty funny

I really enjoyed reading this, it can be related to more than one topic in my mind as I read it. Upvoted and followed. Please take a look and see if any of my poetry is of interest to you. @laurabean

Will do, Thank you for your support :)

This one's good too. This poem is a glimpse of what some of your readers wish would be a past memory of a love once known. By the way, the image that you used, where did it came from? is it from an anime?

This one is just fan art as far as I know :)

I can feel the sadness and betrayal.

It hurts but all I can do is move past it

Ahh, yes, and an end,
is but another beginning
whether skinning the cat
or riding the rat
adapting and evolving
is really where its at


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Keep writing!!
Express thy Universe.

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