Poem / Needed for Success

in poetry •  7 years ago 

Needed for Success

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When should I give up
Dreams are always achievable
With prayer and good luck

With hard work and intense labor
My life will earn heavenly favor
Striving to do the best I can
Trying to be the better man

Every step is thought out
Only deviating when emergency shouts
To be successful is my number one dream
I can only make it if my heart and mind are a team

Getting rid of distraction
Getting rid of temporal satisfaction
I need to end bad habits
To focus on my educational status

One day I will provide
A satisfactory life
For my children
My family, my wife

Focus on whats right
Success will be in sight

By Ethan
2017/06/11

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A lot of truths in your poem. Success is within your grasp only if you work for it.
I also write poems. Check out my poem to my autistic son.
https://steemit.com/poetry/@positivesteem/if-i-am-a-superhero-a-poem-dedicated-to-my-autistic-son

I always do, I enjoy your poems, they have so much meaning behind them :)

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"Focus on whats right
Success will be in sight" - Amazing!

Love the poem and the image as well!

Keep your posts coming! Please check out mine as well. Thank you.

Thank you, I'll check it out