Random Stranger pt 2
With fingers shaking
I looked at the note and then back at my phone
I typed it in a couple of time
Just to make sure I wasn't calling an old age home
First ring
nothing
Second ring
I'm feeling nervous
Third ring
What if this is a fake
Fourth ring
Maybe this is a mistake
Just as the fifth started
She picked up her phone and answered
She asked in a pleasant voice
This is ____ how can I help you?
I slowly got a grip on my tongue
And assembled the words
I answered This is me
The guy on the bench under that tree
She giggled and replied
I didn't think you'd waste your time
You seemed so lost in your mind
I asked if I could meet her sometime
Just to meet up and hang out
See what our lives had in common
And why she could respond to my shout
It's nearly dusk
I hope she likes my musk
This place we are meeting at
I hope it's not an awkward greeting
A glimpse of her face
I've only seen it once
But It's imprinted in my brains
A stunning black crystalline dress
Eye's that looked like stardust
A hand stretched out
One I'm willing to trust
We met at a ballroom
The only place I was comfortable being myself
A place where I didn't need to put on a second face
This was my domain
By Ethan
2017/08/12
I really loved this sequel to your previous poem. It was engaging and happy for me. I gave me some hope. I really hope it ends in a positive way. I'll keep my fingers crossed! :D
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we shall see :)
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hmm romantic ..
good post my friend like my post if u can ..thxn
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Will do :D Thanks for reading :)
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Always makes the posts interesting than you to
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sometimes I try to write few words..but you are far better than me..would you check mine https://steemit.com/poetry/@virus333/dream
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Will do :)
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Happy to see you made a part two. Im starting to very much so warm to these two characters. I want their romance to work out :]
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:D your idea gave me inspiration
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Wow!!! I am so so happy about that!!!!!=) & you did a fantastic job xxx
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Nice.
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nice poem........
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Cool. I love this.
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Really wanted to know how the story would continue, love it that you actually wrote a follow-up!
Nice readings ✔️
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Thank you :)
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Yes I did enjoyed your piece.
Thank you!
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Anime. <3 And the poem was great too! I hope I could read more of this. Keep it up. :))
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