I really wanted to leave the story right there but I couldn't it was killing my mind to think of the many outcomes, so now I have chosen one ☺ I hope you enjoy ^~^
Random Stranger pt 5
I leaned my head back
To see how she would react
To all the words I just said
They probably spun around in her head
I looked into her eyes
And saw that their blue began to shine
Ovals formed in the corners
A droplet found its way down her cheek
A smile stretched across her face
She strangled me with her warm embrace
She began to cry softly
Saying she'll never leave me
She eventually let go
Her make up was smudge all over the show
I wiped up all her tears
Told her there's nothing to fear
I stood up and offered her a hand
She was to overwhelmed to stand
The night had gotten old
I escorted her to her car
I didn't want to move to far
She held my hand hesitating to let go
I was now all alone
Standing on the sidewalk
I smiled like an idiot
Thinking finally I got what I needed
One step down the pavement
I had time to think
She told me she saw my pains
I can't let her feel hers again
The night got colder
It didn't matter
After a few hours not being able to sleep
I turned over and got to feet
I paced my room
Looked for my phone
Found it under my bed
I had to express the things in my head
She gave me purpose again
She gave me a direction
A goal to work for
A reason to pick myself off the floor.
By Ethan
2017/08/15
upvoted..wow good work senpai...^_^ kindly see my poem too and upvoted it..thanks..https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/the-bluepost-someone-dragging-you-down-poem
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will do :)
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Great poem that it's not good to put that much happiness into the hands of any person. That person needs to be happy on there own before they will enter into any kind of healthy relationship.
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It's just a story. I am not very trusting to people and wouldn't allow then to be what keeps me running
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Awesome, beautiful story! I love the emotion
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And this is love in action.. When two souls cling...
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It was real between them. I could feel it from your words. I loved your story and I'm so happy you decided to write more on this. It really was touching and made me smile. I think this is one of your best poems for me. Thank-you for choosing the best path for this poem. Thank-you Ethan!!! :D
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your poem just imagine..awsome great
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if it be the ending, it ends perfectly.. on a happy note :)
The highs of being in a loving relationship and those pangs to the heart when you reflect on your significant other..
well done on all your continued success with this series. & I have to say I am glad I told you to keep going with the flow.. =]
could actually imagine it as it's own animi...
ahh! loveliness :]
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Thank you for you suppor and uplifting comments, I really enjoyed writing this little series. I probably won't continue it further but who knows.
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Always a pleasure, your talent is outstanding and always enjoy the journey is takes me <3
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Very sublime! I like how you convey a beautiful story with your poems. This phrase is magic:
I am one of your great followers!
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Thank you for always supporting :) I like making these little stories, they are usually a show of my desires :D
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