Poem / Save Me Now

in poetry •  7 years ago 

Save Me Now

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Save my poor damned soul
As I stair into this empty hole a
Vast space expands infront of me
Every millimeter looking like freedom

My hearts done my minds numb
Every memory is no longer worth jt

Now as I stair into this space grab me by the face
Object my view and give me a reason
Well I contemplate jumping in

By Ethan
2017/11/14

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Nice, though I would make a couple small changes.

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        ·  7 years ago 

      U have exceptional writing skills l like that

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Beautiful words and creative writing

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Again I get you with a very beautiful expression. Thanks, Good luck.

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              ·  7 years ago (edited)

            Good poem. It reminded me of the importance of what paramedics do to their accident victims. They keep talking to the injured victim and giving them reasons to continue living with us and hold on to life.

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